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©2009 ~Aurihalcon
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"What did you DO to him?!"

The red sphere quivered and writhed in the sheathed hand of the human - a marionette of the thrice cursed Diadem floating behind it.

Klo shunted another star from his pocket universe into a tiny gap between planes, ready to be released at the enemy.

"Did you think you could go gallivanting through the realm without any responsibilities? How long did you expect to escape my notice?"

"THAT WAS MY BROTHER!!!"

From Klo's outstreched hands, a horrendous explosion instantly engulfed the black spidery being and its human puppet. But in moments, the event collapsed and coalesced into a small, nondescript blob in front of him. Several rings and geometric lines arced and traced over the mass, keeping it inert while Klo stared at it in horror.

"Your powers of matter manipulation are mediocre at best." Diadem the human said. "It's your dimensional hacking that worries me." He tossed the red sphere he was holding into the abyss beneath them. "Are all of your species like that?"

"I'm the only one left, now." Klo said.

Diadem sneered. "Nice try. I already found out from your brother where your homeworld is. They're next."

Klo screamed in rage the instant before his body sloughed away into dust. Then, a thousand shards of glassy, blood-red needles materialized and pulled away at his soul until only a basic conciousness was left.

Diadem tossed that over his shoulder as well.


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EDIT: "fixed" lighting and some details on the armor. It's at least tollerable now.

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:iconburnz08:
hey I like the idea but don´t you think it could be much better when you bring more detail in the armour like you do in the energy thing :)

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:iconaurihalcon:
Yah I agree entirely. I wasn't happy with his armor from the beginning and for the life of me, couldn't figure out why or what else could be added.

looks like I need more practice :XD:

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:iconultema:
I think the design of the armor is fine but it seems the coloring could use some work to bring it more into the image; highlights of color from what's going on around it, maybe some surface damage in order to ground it or something.

Sexy though, in both terms of image and narration X)

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"There is a difference between a psychopath, and a sociopath -- A psychopath can't help it; he doesn't know the difference between right and wrong. A sociopath ... now, a sociopath just doesn't give a damn." -Ryle Daup, the Guillotine Grin.
:iconaurihalcon:
Oh, you mean like adding in red because of all the red light for example? MAN, I didn't even think about that :shakefist: psh, dang, gotta go fix that...

And thanks! =D

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:iconultema:
XD! It's coo! That's one of those things where if you don't think about it, you really do sit and stare and go "Goddamnit what's wrong with this >:C!?"

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"There is a difference between a psychopath, and a sociopath -- A psychopath can't help it; he doesn't know the difference between right and wrong. A sociopath ... now, a sociopath just doesn't give a damn." -Ryle Daup, the Guillotine Grin.
:iconaurihalcon:
Heheheh! Yup, I've done that before... alot.

Well It's better now. Still not perfect, but better.

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:icondeboahan:
Those highlights look cool. :D
Looks like someone you shouldn't be messing with. And based on the story below... sounds like he's some big boss huh? XD

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Hadouken!!
:icondeboahan:
Oh crap, I just remembered... Diadem's that cool looking guy from your sprite deviation right? 8D *spazz*

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Hadouken!!
:iconaurihalcon:
thankies =D

Heheh, Diadem was made in my munchkin days where all my characters were the most powerful to have ever existed! :XD: Kinda Dragonball Z-esqe...

While I've toned that down QUITE a lot, I still maintain that if he isn't the most powerful, Diadem is the OLDEST living thing in existence and therefore the most experienced.

Even after all my roleplaying with him, I'm still not sure what made him so bitter :XD:

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